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How to Write a Juicy Bio
I am always
surprised by the lackluster bios that I see after articles, in show
programs and advertisements. Most of the time YOU are in control of what
gets printed, so why not use that space to jazz it up? A bio can create
credibility and expand your business. Don’t blow it by printing a list of
uninteresting and irrelevant facts.
Who’s
reading the bio? What can you do for them? How can you make their life
easier, more fun, more profitable? How can you convey these ideas in a way
that appeals to their emotions, values, or humanity? (This is what sells,
not your values or your level of expertise). Why would someone want to get
this from you? Who are you? What have you done? How can you show that? Why
should the reader trust what you say?
Now
that you know what can be included in your bio, think about how you want
to say it. You should always start with your most impressive or unique
achievements first. You may only have someone’s attention for thirty
seconds. If you haven’t sold them in the first thirty seconds, they may
not read what comes next.
Write
succinctly and clearly. Use a writing style that reflects who you are so
that your reader gets an idea of your personality. Show rather than tell.
Avoid hyperbole. Use specific facts to back up or illustrate what you are
saying. Keep it simple. One to three paragraphs (depending on where it’s
being printed) are plenty. If it’s appropriate to use a headline, use one.
Here
are some examples. The first is targeted to dancers in need of dance
coaching. The second is targeted to people who are interested in building
their dance business.
Has
Your Dance Reached a Plateau? Do You Need Inspiration To Get Going Again?
Taaj is a dance coach who can save you time, energy and money by
pin-pointing exactly what you need to get you back on track. Samira, one
of Taaj’s award winning students said, “It is hard to express how
impactful your detailed and thoughtful comments and targeted assistance
are. Everyone who has had you as a resource is so lucky!”
Taaj is a teacher's teacher.
Through her
e-books, newsletter,
teleseminars,
coaching,
workshops, and association with
MEDIA (Middle Eastern Dance Instructors' Association), she's helped
many belly dancers become more successful business women, teachers, and
students. She's more than just a belly dance teacher. If you are serious
about being a better Middle Eastern dancer, teacher, or building your
dance business, you can't ignore what she has to offer.
The next time you have the
opportunity to write your own bio or introduction, don’t blow it with a
dry recount of what you are wearing, what you are dancing to, or how much
you love to dance. Make it juicy. Make it jump off the page and touch them
so that you will be remembered.